In this evaluation I wasn't showing my work to Fred or Amber, but to an industry professional. This was good to get someone elses views on our work. He was very positive about everyones work which was nice to hear as it was a bit too late to make many changes if we had of done loads wrong anyway!
The only things he mentioned with mine is that there was no return address which was a good point. To be honest, I wish that there was some points to work on as 'm sure there are some other things I have missed which would make it better. I am very happy with what I have produced however. It is the first piece on this course that I would be happy to put my name to!